Tutoring

Tuesdays tutoring session went really well. A women came in from nursing school and needed help on a paper about constipation. I was very interested in what she had to say about this class and paper because I am applying for nursing school. Her paper was very well written and she really did not need that much help. My partner and I looked over her paper and didn't have too much to say about it. They only problem that she seemed to have was that some of her paragraphs were too long and could have been broken. She had two different subjects in one very long paragragh and they should have been two different paragraphs.